Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued by some people that due to the frequent cases of bodily

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from boxing, it should be ban in

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modern era. I disagree with

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view because some

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sports

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do cause similar

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and there are measures put in place to protect boxers from

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. One significant reason for the support of boxing today is owning to the fact that some other common

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often result in similar

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such

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as football, car racing and baseball inflict people with life-threatening wounds or have caused the death of some

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personalities.

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, in 2014, a popular young footballer in Nigeria, sustained a ruptured spleen while playing football and

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lead to his death.

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, it would not be just to restrict boxing when other

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result in physical

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as well.

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, organisers of boxing matches do provide protective standards for the participants.

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is geared towards reducing or preventing

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during the course of a fight.

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, amateur boxers wear protective

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in Olympic boxing matches while referees

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to stop a bloody fight and declare a winner before a

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. These precautionary measures have helped to reduce the frequency and the severity of

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. In conclusion,

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boxers often sustain

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injury

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during fights, boxing should not be ban due to the fact that some other

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sports

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cause similar

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and protective measures are often ensured during fights. More people should

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about these reasons.

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the plants below show a public park when it first opend in 1920 and the same park today.