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Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like, while others say that they should think more realistically about their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some
people
 consider that the coming age of
people
 should be able to make their own choice of career path. Others think that they should be more practical and need to put more priority on the potential of the
job
. I will deal with
the
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both sides of the view and add my thoughts on them. To commence with, every parent wants their children to follow
their
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 footsteps. So when the children are under the influence or pressure of their beloved parents, things turn out to be worse. Under
such
 circumstances, children cannot proceed
further
 like their forefathers.
Hence
, bad consequences occur.
Consequently
,
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 upbringing is the cause.
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, South East Asia’s youth confront many challenges before entering the
job
 phase.
Moreover
, they cannot continue
further
 based on their strengths and weaknesses.
Therefore
, the youth needs motivation and inspiration to study their likeable subjects.
In addition
, young
people
 feel despair when they fail to attain in their early life.
In other words
, they can have
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 of mind regarding their likeable subjects.
For example
, anyone can shift his/her department from one subject to another.
This
 is essential for every intellectual who are in their mid-twenties.
Additionally
,
in
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this
 age
people
 have
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 enthusiasm to work harder.
On the other hand
, others state that young
people
 should be more serious in selecting a
job
. They need to check if the salary is higher.
Also
, they need to work under a renowned company or organization. Though some
people
 want to work according to their devotion and passion, they need to realize their family crisis and financial expense.
Therefore
, they should keep their passion as an extra activity. Or else they can keep it as a
second
 choice. From my point of view, the conclusion, young
people
 should consider more the solid factor before they acquire a
job
 or else they would regret
for
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what they did due to the low salary or poor prospect. Pursuing own interest is normal, but it is necessary to have enough savings
first
.
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