Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is true that some countries increase their dependence on fossil fuels, but others choose to

use

alternative

sources

of

energy

instead

of the consumption of oil and coal. While I think that the

use

of renewable

sources

brings tangible benefits to people, I agree that there are some negative consequences of these kinds of

energy

. Dependence on renewable

sources

has led to some issues. The most important impact is the safety concerns.

For example

, some incidents

such

as the explosion of nuclear plants in Japan have caused poisonous and radioactive emissions, which not only killed people

,

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but

also

left a legacy of cancer deaths in the future. Another thing is that other kinds of

energy

are criticized for other reasons.

For instance

, many local communities oppose the installation of wind farms which causes too much noise and affects the landscape. In

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, some people think that a great deal of money is required to carry out projects about alternative

sources

seems to be a waste of money.

However

, it is evident that the consumption of renewable

sources

are

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more beneficial

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that

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the

use

of fossil fuels.

Firstly

, the burning of non-renewable

energy

has discharged carbon dioxide into the

atsmosphere

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, while renewable

energy

sources

are eco-friendly.

Thus

, the consumption of renewable

sources

contributes to improving the quality of air and mitigating other negative consequences including global warming and climate change.

Secondly

, fossil fuels are

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and more expensive. Alternative

sources

such

as solar power and tidal power guarantee boundless supplies of

energy

. In conclusion, despite some negative consequences

such

as safety concerns and environmental pollution, countries over the world should

use

these types of

energy

.