People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problem can this cause? What solutions can you suggest

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are changing day by day with their
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life styles
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, these changes can
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face some severe problems and some solutions need to be done to reduce these issues.
, It is accepted that living our lives without changing is easy and comfortable.
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, nobody would change his or her job to a new one
that is
not familiar at all. Those who always stay in a comfort zone
of taking risky things in their lives might lose the chance to discover new experiences. As an
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are afraid to go abroad and discover because of their cultural believes and apparently, they might be simply satisfying their old life in their own country.
, different age generations in a family might have experiences in their relationship id they are with the good
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of changes in life. Especially for the old
. We all know that the viewpoint of one generation is in some way high comparing with that of the other generation.
, if
do not learn how to accept a new way of thinking or have a flexible state of mind, their relationships could become worse. Making understand and living can solve
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of problems and make peoples unity. In conclusion, any problem has its answer for society,
should be encouraged to spend much more time together.
, a good idea is for everyone to change their minds for the betterment of our society. It is essential for
to make careful decisions towards changes in their lives.
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