To what extent do you agree or disagree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are many families, who do not send their children to
government
schools, and they also
believe that it is not necessary for them to pay taxes that support high authority education
. I completely agree with this
statement.
Many people who send child at the private school they don't like taxes to pay
help universal Add the particle
topay
education
, which I found quite fear because , private school or college charge excessively high amount of fee for their student, that's why if nation also
charges them for educational development which they are not using that will waste lots of money
of the parent. On the other hand
, private schools and universities seem to be more advanced than government
-funded colleges. So that I think their children do not have any government
college helps in the future.
Also
, I believe that if the money
that nation takes as a tax is not collected from the parent they get a chance to use that money
on other work like household. To invest in some business, to provide education
to their other child. I think if the nation does not have any role to help children during their student period it is unfair to takes taxes from their families to improve universal education
although
this
is not what they are going to get. For another example, If government
spend money
from the tax to provide some training to their student after that also
who do not take education
from there are not going to get the opportunity to born.
In the conclusion, the people who don't take their child to government
financial school have to be free from the tax which is used in universal support so that they are not in the over economical load. That will help them to use their money
on other productive work.Submitted by prakritikadel8 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite