Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Obtaining
information
is relevant to produce accurate results. It is often thought that sharing personal data to be used in scientific papers, businesses, and the academe is beneficial. However
, others believe that such
activity invades an individual’s privacy. In this
essay, I would be discussing both views, arrive at a conclusion, and state my personal opinion.
On the one hand, providing all the necessary information
is advantageous. In this
way, all variables can possibly provide accurate results. For instance
, a restaurant in the Philippines requires its customers to completely fill out the COVID-19 contact tracing form upon entry with their full name, place of residence, contact numbers, gender, and age. If a positive case occurs, the staff may then
inform not only probable carriers of the virus but also
those who came in close contact with them. Consequently
, the owner can send these
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this information
information
to the Department of Health to study the occurrences in regards with
age and sexes.
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On the other hand
, sharing data can have its drawbacks. First
, these can be used for fraudulent transactions, which involve hacking of the credit card or even identity theft, because all the information
are
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For example
, a woman, who accidentally clicked on a phishing survey, gives out her name, address, and personal mobile number. Because of this
, the website can use her credentials to eventually pose as her.
In conclusion, some believe that giving out information
plays a vital role in researches, businesses, as well as in the universities, while others think that it is not always the case. It may provide positive effects because further
studies can be conducted correctly. However
, it can also
lead to detrimental effect
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effects
such
as stealing one’s identity. In my opinion, it is better to give out all the necessary information
to aid in producing results accurately.Submitted by ysabela_nasol on
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