Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective.

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Congestion of vehicle on road and pollution are the main concern for any nation. Many folks believe that one of the solutions to the above issues can be the increase in the cost of petroleum products. I strongly disagree with it and will discuss the reasons along with other options available to tackle the problem.
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with, transportation, including buses, cars, and trucks, is essential for commuting to work, personal uses and deliver essential goods respectively and affect all individuals in a direct or indirect manner.
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expensive fuel will reduce environmental degradation, It would cause a financial burden on the general public.
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, medium class population who do not have personal vehicles use public transport all the time
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, there is a requirement to find out other possible options to mitigate
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issue. One measure is to aware people to use buses or car pulling which includes informing society about its financial benefits.
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saving, for a young person, from car pulling can be a large amount in a year if he uses public transport. Other is to force strict law for a vehicle manufacturer to focus on reduced emission of polluting gases.
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will lead to an increase in price, people will use more public transport. Increased production of Electric vehicles which is high cost but is an environment-friendly machine. In conclusion, increased number of the vehicle and the pollution issues can be controlled by rising cost but not the best method. Alternatively, Involving citizens and controlling the automobile industry for improved machinery can be an easily implemented policy.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • secondly
  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
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  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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