Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.

Animals
have been used repeatedly throughout the history of biometric research and these days
animals
experiments
are increasing continuously. Some people think experiment on
animals
is cruel and not humane so we should ban these
experiments
, Even
although
others think it is vital for the future of humanity. In
this
essay, we will discuss both views and in the end, I will give my opinion.
To begin
with, from century to century humans face different kinds of cases of flu, viruses and scientists try to tackle them. It is important for scientists to make antidotes. These anti-dotes can't use directly on human beings because it is dangerous and harmful for them.
For Instance
, according to the record in 1992 one of the pharma
company
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made flu medicine without testing on
animals
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thousands of people died owing to the reaction of the medicines so it is vital to save humanity scientists need to test
first
on
animals
.
On the other hand
, Those
experiments
make
animals
life hang in the balance.
For Example
, numerous rabbits and rats catch so they make vaccines for the community
such
as a covid vaccine . A number of wild
animals
uses
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for making vaccines
as a result
they
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suffer a lot and some of them died because of the
experiments
. In conclusion, these researches
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helpful for humankind to the contrast, they cause lots of pain to them so people should more careful and they try to use some non-living thing or if some examine gives us result so we spread them
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therefore
others one is not trying the same experiment again. It will be helped to save
animals
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ethics
  • Morality
  • Vivisection
  • In vivo testing
  • Cruelty-free
  • Animal welfare
  • Biomedical research
  • Toxicology
  • Sentience
  • Compassionate
  • Humane
  • Speciesism
  • In vitro
  • Alternative methods
  • Pharmacology
  • Clinical trials
  • Bioethics
  • Animal rights
  • Pain threshold
  • Efficacy
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