As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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Nowadays, most
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people were having a major concern about their income. Working a lot and at the end of the day thinking about their bills, expenses and allowances. Workers were having myriad concerns about
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satisfaction
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.
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, working in other fields.
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, as an adult, one will have a fear about their personal (or) family well being. Everyone wants to provide
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best for their family.
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, every
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holder wants to give luxurious life to his wife and children . So, he
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not care about the
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, he just wanted to be on the top and earn a lot.
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of people just wanted to enjoy the
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, my sister, who studied masters in Electronics and Communications got myriad offers as a software developer but, she had rejected all believing that she can get a
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in chip designing. After 2 months she got placed in Intel.
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, she had a promotion as
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head.
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,
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satisfaction
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should be
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part
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work
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life. As elderly people
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“We should not run towards money, money should run after us”.
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satisfaction
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is important rather than making high capital. Henceforth, Earning
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huge capital without
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satisfaction
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can cause stress.
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, loving the
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is key to Happiness and prosperity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job satisfaction
  • wellbeing
  • contribute
  • meaningful work
  • work-life balance
  • career progression
  • workplace environment
  • recognition
  • constructive feedback
  • compensation
  • benefits
  • job security
  • autonomy
  • skills match
  • interests match
  • variety
  • challenge
  • economic conditions
  • labor market
  • individual expectations
  • job role
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