Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Graduation college should be attended by
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male
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and
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equally for all
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. Higher educational institutes should allow equal opportunities to study each subject without
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difference
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. I believe, in
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level of acceptance in all
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. Because these days
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girls and boys can study any subject and show their capabilities by learning and interest
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, If there are unequal students in any subject considering
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, It may cause problems in future. As an example more
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in computer science, Will choose
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job
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jobs
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like software developers. By following
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only female employees get to work in these industries.
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hand
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boys will only get more
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in mechanical
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resulting from non-computer
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.
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can cause diversification problems and only one
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will be working in one specific domain, while
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in
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domain.
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, equal opportunities in all
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,
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could help in raising in employment as
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male
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and
female
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work together, to achieve higher goals. While considering equal options
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employers
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also
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look for
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gender
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candidates and that will result in more girls in many fields like national security, mechanical and scientific jobs.
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in many countries still
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are less exposed to jobs, mostly they are looking for household works or childcare. To conclude,
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ratio of male and female in all
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definitely improve employment for women and
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empower them. All
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and universities should consider
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and will
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in
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future
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specially
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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