Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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girls and boys can study any subject and show their capabilities by learning and interest
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similar jobs
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candidates and that will result in more girls in many fields like national security, mechanical and scientific jobs. For ,instance in many countries still Use synonyms
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are less exposed to jobs, mostly they are looking for household works or childcare.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite