There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children, Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couple who decide to do this.

Unlikely the past decades, modern society is relatively free to choose among couples whether they will have
children
or not. While some people wish to have
children
without any doubt, it is
also
true that there are couples preferring to spend their
life
without
children
. In
this
essay, I am going to discuss both perspectives, pros and cons. Some might say that having
children
makes your family more
plesant
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pleasant
but the greatest advantage for
that is
securing your future.
In other words
, it is an
investiment
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investment
. Since 2000, the words so-called `Kodokushi` in Japanese which meant die-alone well prevailed in
society
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. According to the survey conducted in 2017, around 70 per cent of those who passed away categorized as Kodokushi did not have any
children
. Losing
stable
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income that most of the
time triggered
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by retirement impacted
on
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their well-being
life
sustainability and
eventually
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couple can not maintain his or her
life
.
Thus
, having
children
provides a sort of security particularly when couples get old and can no longer expect stable income.
On the other hand
, taking into account that an
eldery
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elderly
house can be an option for
life
support in the future, spending one's
life
without
children
has some benefits.
For instance
in Japan, it is alleged that more than 10 million Japanese Yen is needed to raise one kid from kindergarten to higher education at university. Henceforth, those who do not have
children
can fully enjoy
life
for their own purpose.
Furthermore
, even a couple has a higher salary, especially when
children
are still
baby
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, it is not allowed to have time for your own sake. Saving money and time is the greatest merit for not having
children
. In sum, whether a couple decides to have
children
is totally contingent on their choice. What society or political level should do is to prepare support for any type of family for promoting diversity but not exclusion.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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