You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Grace, Warmest greetings from New York! I hope

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, I made the decision to reallocate to Europe, and I am going to study in Switzerland in October.

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, my university is located in your hometown, and it is a great opportunity to meet you again in Luzern.

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, I would like to ask you for some help. I am arranging my arrival in September in order to have more time for preparation,

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a part-time job, just to release

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pressure from my bank account and earn some pocket money to cover daily expenses. I remember your sister was working in a job agency

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summer, was not she? I am wondering if she could help me to find something suitable based on my experience and available schedule. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! Sincerely yours, Ernest

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

170 words

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Educational aspirations
Work experience
Financial independence
Resume (or CV)
Local job market
International student
Legal requirements
Student work permit
Employment trends
Time management
Networking
A part-time position
Balance studies and work
Job hunting strategies

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