Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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As we are living in the modern society, we will come across unexpected situations daily, which we need to face and overcome them in order to succeed in our
life
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. If something goes wrong, we should not get demotivated from that, rather we should try to learn from it. Some proportion of
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feels that it is best to accept a bad
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, like an unsatisfactory
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or shortage of
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, while
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others believe that, we should try to improve
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scenarios. “Failure is the stepping stone to Success”, as the famous lines
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,
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should encourage themselves whenever a bad instance happens in their
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.
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, an individual might encounter a
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in which he has no
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to pay for pursuing higher studies and there is no alternative, except to accept the small
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he has gained.
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, in
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situation
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, he can motivate himself by thinking that let us do the
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for
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of years so that he can earn the
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that is
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required to pursue a graduate study.
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, the person can take note of an added advantage like the
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experience, which will put him one step ahead, compared to his peers in the higher studies. On the other side of the coin, citizens will try to degrade themselves in a bad
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comparing to others and try to accept it, thinking their fate is not good.
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, as mentioned in the earlier example, some
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might stop at the very instant of not having
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for procuring
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-level studies. At
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point
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time, they will accept the small
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, but in
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do not try to make their
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better.
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to conclude,
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people
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face varied situations in their
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, some might be good and
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others
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may be bad. It is their presence of mind and the ability to make it better
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will provide a road to succeed in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
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