Some people think that individuals are becoming more dependent on each other in modern society, while others believe that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Few

people

believe that individuals are becoming more reliant on each other.

This

is because, the

economy

is not self-sustaining at

this

period of time to live an independent life, thereby making persons rely on each other for

support

.

This

support

could be financially, emotionally etc.

For instance

,

an

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economy

where the cost of living is high because of the inflation in prices, the standard of living of many human beings reduces

therefore

, persons who earn more and can help with excess

they

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have

support

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others

at

this

time.

Also

, the upbringing of

people

can

also

result

into

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in

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being dependent on

others

in

such

a way that when one is brought to understand that

responsiblities

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responsibilities

are to be taken cared of by

others

, relying on

others

will become rampant in

the

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society.

On the other hand

,

others

believe that

individulas

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individuals

are becoming more on their own compare to relying on someone else for

support

reason been that, some

people

believe that being independent gives a sense of responsibility, which means

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able to take up challenges on their own with no aid of

support

.

This

can be

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as

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result

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a result

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of living in a

communtiy

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community

where the

economy

is self-sustaining.

Also

, it can sometimes be

as a result

of the upbringing where

people

have been taught how to take up challenges on their own.

For example

, a financially self-supporting person who finds himself or herself in an

economy

that is

not

sustainble

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sustainable

,

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will increase his or her sources of income,

insteading

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instead

of searching

of

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for

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any aid

of

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or

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support

from

others

. I am of the opinion that

,

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individuals are becoming more self-supporting in my society.

reason

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been

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that most

people

have increased their sources of income,

also

have a renewed mindset of taking up challenges that come their way. To conclude, It is of great essence to be self-relying in

a

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society compare to been dependent on

others

for

support

.