Some people think that individuals are becoming more dependent on each other in modern society, while others believe that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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people

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believe that individuals are becoming more reliant on each other.

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is because, the

economy

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is not self-sustaining at

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period of time to live an independent life, thereby making persons rely on each other for

support

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support

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could be financially, emotionally etc.

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economy

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where the cost of living is high because of the inflation in prices, the standard of living of many human beings reduces

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, persons who earn more and can help with excess

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apply

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have

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support

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others

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at

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time.

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, the upbringing of

people

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can

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result

into

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being dependent on

others

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in

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a way that when one is brought to understand that

responsiblities

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responsibilities

are to be taken cared of by

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, relying on

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will become rampant in

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society.

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,

others

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believe that

individulas

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individuals

are becoming more on their own compare to relying on someone else for

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reason been that, some

people

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believe that being independent gives a sense of responsibility, which means

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able to take up challenges on their own with no aid of

support

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.

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can be

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as

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result

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of living in a

communtiy

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community

where the

economy

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is self-sustaining.

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, it can sometimes be

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of the upbringing where

people

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have been taught how to take up challenges on their own.

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, a financially self-supporting person who finds himself or herself in an

economy

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that is

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not

sustainble

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sustainable

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apply

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will increase his or her sources of income,

insteading

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instead

of searching

of

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for

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any aid

of

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or

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support

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from

others

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. I am of the opinion that

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individuals are becoming more self-supporting in my society.

reason

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been

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that most

people

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have increased their sources of income,

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have a renewed mindset of taking up challenges that come their way. To conclude, It is of great essence to be self-relying in

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society compare to been dependent on

others

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for

support

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.