With a fast pace of modern life , more and more people are turning towards fast food for theirs main meals . Do you hinh the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
People in diverse countries are rapidly changing their meal habits and being more prone to
the
junk Correct article usage
apply
food
consumption instead
of their routine meals due to their fast pace lifestyle. Adoption of this
change is definately
inviting health issues and Correct your spelling
definitely
thus
, I think that the advantages
will never outweigh its disadvantages, now or in future.
Considering the advantages
of these junk
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this junk food consumption
food
consumption, due to lack of time and to a rapid transofrmation
of Correct your spelling
transformation
lifestlye
, in which each individual is working hard to achieve their goals in Correct your spelling
lifestyle
this
most competitive world ever, people having less time to consume their lunch or dinner and eat more fast foods
, which are available more conveniently than the traditional foods
and also
available at very cheaper rates. Also
, being worked hard in the office for full
day, Add an article
a full
the full
instead
of preparing meals for the dinner, womens
tends to order Correct your spelling
women
women's
food
from fast
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fast-food
food
chains, which is available on
a single click from their mobile phones, and Change preposition
with
it's
taste and servings lures the infants most.
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its
However
, inspite
of having many Correct your spelling
in spite
advantages
as cited above, there are enormous disadvantages persists
in consuming these non-nutritious Correct pronoun usage
that persists
foods
. Firstly
, consuming these junk foods
on daily basis,
is a mere waste of money for paying Remove the comma
apply
such
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for such
foods
which are unknown for its
quality. Correct pronoun usage
their
Secondly
, These fast meals arre
a rich source of sugar and carbohydrates, which invites Correct your spelling
are
health related
issues Add a hyphen
health-related
such
as obesity and diabetes. Thirdly
, consuming these foods
on daily basis with Correct your spelling
children
childrens
on Correct your spelling
children
dining
table, inculcate wrong Add an article
the dining
a dining
food
practices in the Correct your spelling
children's
children
childrens
and Correct your spelling
children
perheps
resulted to keep away the traditional Correct your spelling
perhaps
food
culture away from the Correct your spelling
children
children's
childrens
and families.
To conclude, Correct your spelling
children
although
there are many varities
of fast Correct your spelling
varieties
foods
available in the market to consume it very convieniently
, Correct your spelling
conveniently
convenient
however
there Add the comma(s)
,however
are
no confirmation on its quality and its benefits to our health system, Change the verb form
is
thus
evenafter
having strong Correct your spelling
even after
advantages
, it's disadvantages outweigh the same.
Which affects their lifestyle and eventually their eating habits.Submitted by vipul_r_goswami on
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