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With a fast pace of modern life , more and more people are turning towards fast food for theirs main meals . Do you hinh the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

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People in diverse countries are rapidly changing their meal habits and being more prone to
the
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junk
food
 consumption
instead
 of their routine meals due to their fast pace lifestyle. Adoption of
this
 change is
definately
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definitely
 inviting health issues and
thus
, I think that the
advantages
 will never outweigh its disadvantages, now or in future. Considering the
advantages
 of
these junk
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food
 consumption, due to lack of time and to a rapid
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 of
lifestlye
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lifestyle
, in which each individual is working hard to achieve their goals in
this
 most competitive world ever, people having less time to consume their lunch or dinner and eat more fast
foods
, which are available more conveniently than the traditional
foods
 and
also
 available at very cheaper rates.
Also
, being worked hard in the office for
full
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a full
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 day,
instead
 of preparing meals for the dinner,
womens
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women
women's
 tends to order
food
 from
fast
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food
 chains, which is available
on
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 a single click from their mobile phones, and
it's
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its
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 taste and servings lures the infants most.
However
,
inspite
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in spite
 of having many
advantages
 as cited above, there are enormous disadvantages
persists
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 in consuming these non-nutritious
foods
.
Firstly
, consuming these junk
foods
 on daily basis
,
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 is a mere waste of money for paying
such
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foods
 which are unknown for
its
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their
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 quality.
Secondly
, These fast meals
arre
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are
 a rich source of sugar and carbohydrates, which invites
health related
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 issues
such
 as obesity and diabetes.
Thirdly
, consuming these
foods
 on daily basis with
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children
childrens
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children
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 on
dining
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the dining
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 table, inculcate wrong
food
 practices in the
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children's
children
childrens
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children
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 and
perheps
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perhaps
 resulted to keep away the traditional
food
 culture away from the
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children
children's
childrens
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children
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 and families. To conclude,
although
 there are many
varities
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varieties
 of fast
foods
 available in the market to consume it very
convieniently
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conveniently
convenient
,
however
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 there
are
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 no confirmation on its quality and its benefits to our health system,
thus
evenafter
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even after
 having strong
advantages
, it's disadvantages outweigh the same. Which affects their lifestyle and eventually their eating habits.
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