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The news media have too much influence on peoples lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Media
 is
vital
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a vital
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 part of whole the
world
's life and survival assistance.
People
 are adversely affected by the news as some
people
 think while others opine there are a lot of benefits as well. Here, I will illustrate here in
this
 essay both views. On the one hand, some
people
 believe that
media
 has a negative influence on
people
 as
media
 sometimes try to impact the personal life of few
people
 badly
consequently
 individuals generally get stressed because of interference.
Moreover
, children get the bad effects of
media
 while watching tv and other social sources because sometimes
media
 telecast few non-watchable things for kids but as a family entertainment sometimes kids get involved. Adding to
this
,
media
 sometimes give a wrong message to the public regarding religion so
this
 is the main reason for riots or fights .
On the other hand
, the public is in favour of
media
 as a concern of a lot of benefits
likewise
media
 is a good source of entertainment and information as in
this
 era
people
 are so busy in other activities
as a result
media
 fulfil all their requiring source of knowledge.
Furthermore
,
media
 is a good provider of the whole
world
,s news and headlines of any issue.
Additionally
, sometimes nations try to touch the whole
world
 to get in touch or convey a message regarding any disaster or
world
 unity so
media
 is the only source of
this
. Overall,
media
 is the best provider of the
world
 to get in touch of any news so ,basically, its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
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