some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals think that it is better to try and improve when we are facing the situations like an unpleasant job career or inadequate
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money. Others debate that the best way for
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is to stand with it. In my opinion,
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would prefer to make a change. According to my experiences, some
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their future and
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ready to make a change. Most times, they just want to keep what they already have rather than take a risk.
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with what you have. Just like some
people
living in southeast Asia, even though many of them are living below the poverty line, they still feeling happy with their lives.
On the contrary
, some
people
would prefer to pursue better living conditions if they are not satisfied with current situations. These
people
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challenge or perhaps a motivation of making efforts in their lives.
For instance
, my friend Tom always wanted to become an artist, for
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painting in his spare time despite the opposition from his family and
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got into his dream art school.
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for
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. In conclusion,
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think different
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would try to improve if
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am facing
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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