You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house •say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend •suggest when and where you could meet your friend next

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Dear Abhi, I am writing

this

letter to let you know

that

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how much I

loved

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love

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your new house. The tiny garden

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the balcony is so refreshing,

as well as

the living space is so colourful and pretty. I really had a great time staying with your family. Let me explain in more detail. The food at your place is delicious.

Although

your mom always used to give you tasty tiffin during our school days, getting to taste that again was indeed awesome.

Moreover

, I love the idea of the entire family having dinner together and having a 10-minute chat after that. During

this

era of social media, I think it is important that we come out of that zone and have some meaningful conversations with family members. Can we please meet up again in the next month? There is a long weekend in the 3rd week. I am fine if you come down to my place, or else I can visit yours. Let’s just again relive those golden memories. I look forward to hearing from you. Your Friend, Shreya

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task response

Expand on the aspects of the friend's new house that you liked and provide more details to fully address the task.

coherence cohesion

Organize the letter with clearer paragraph structure and use appropriate greeting and closing phrases to enhance coherence and cohesion.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

181 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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