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Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#educators #child #instrument
Many of the teachers have agreed that every kid should be exposed
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 to learn a musical instrument. I strongly agree that
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 of them should know how to play a musical instrument because it can give them a positive impact.
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, there are
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 things to consider if a child is willing to do so. In the recent research of music and arts in
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, it was found that a high percentage of pupils have shown a good attitude while learning to play
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. Perhaps, it had given them a lot of opportunities to share their knowledge and help each other
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 how to play with the strings. It made them a way to interact with each other rather
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 with their digital gadgets and have fun online. While on the other side, it can
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 a lot of children because they have
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 of interests. Some of them may have
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 sports like basketball, volleyball, badminton and many others rather than music. They have their own and unique talents and skills to enjoy in
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. To conclude, it is good that some of the
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 may believe that teaching their pupils to a musical instrument.
However
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 of playing it
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because
 maybe their interests are to some other things.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educators
  • taught
  • play a musical instrument
  • benefits
  • cognitive skills
  • academic performance
  • physical coordination
  • motor skills
  • discipline
  • perseverance
  • express themselves
  • self-confidence
  • stress relief
  • relaxation
  • creativity
  • imagination
  • inclusivity
  • equal access
  • arts education
  • practical challenges
  • implementing
  • universal
  • balance
  • mandatory
  • academic subjects
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