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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #children #ages #outweigh
Changing roles in
family
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 has multiple outcomes, getting married late and expanding family in
mid
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 or late
thirties
 is becoming common practice.
This
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advantages
. There are numerous
advantages
 of having a child late.
Firstly
, having children late allows the couple to be financially and mentally strong. To exemplify, individuals can have more focus on their
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 as they do not have the responsibility of a child, resulting in
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financial growth, enhancing
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monetary stability.
Secondly
, after
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age
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 people will be more mature and will be able to take good care of their children.
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, In comparison to young people, people in their
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mid-thirties
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mid
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thirties
 or early forties are better equipped emotionally. Despite several
advantages
, it has enormous disadvantages. Primarily, some of the studies show women tend to be physically weak after
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thirties
, which directly affect their reproductive system, leading to physically and mentally challenged babies.
For example
, increasing cases of autism has proven
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 pregnant late can be
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 to their future children.
In addition
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this
, having a baby in
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mid
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thirties
 or early forties can lead to scarcity of resources as individuals’ retiring age and the child’s higher education may occur simultaneously. To exemplify, university education is costly as well as saving for retirement is
also
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this
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 a difficult task. To conclude,
although
 having multiple
advantages
, expanding your family after a certain age have
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 negative outcome.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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