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In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the
time
 to come, all transport will be without driver and
full
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 automatic and
also
 people, who take a distance will be inside of it. In
this
 essay, I will consider the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 topic and I will express my own opinion on the matter.
Firstly
 I will explore the positives of what is the benefits of driverless vehicles in our life and
secondly
, I will discuss what can be the negatives of
this
 trend. In the not to distance future, we will see the cars without needing for driver and the machine will move with self with connecting to the internet maybe. One of a good way of
this
 trend, will be the people does not need to get a driver licence and everybody from a young age to oldest can go easily wheresoever they want without needing to anybody.
Furthermore
, these
outomobiles
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automobiles
 doesn't need any rest and they can work seven twenty-four.
For example
, if you want to take
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a longe
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longe
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long
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 distance and you are tired and need to sleep you can do your rest in your car and
also
 save your
time
 or maybe you can study and go wherever you want at the same
time
moreover
, you can have a fun
time
 with your family and friends in the car.
On the other hand
,
this
 machinery can have some disadvantages for people's life.
For instance
, many persons will lose their jobs and they will have problems in making money and it is opening the door for
loss
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the loss
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 their confidence and argument with their families and at the end unhappy lives. In conclusion, the government should
gives
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 another occupation for
who
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those who
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 lose their work because of
this
 plan. In my opinion, if
this
 problem solves there are no negatives with
this
 plan.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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