Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

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nowadays has become an important part of student lifestyle while it can be a significant role
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their education. Through the negative side of using the
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by children, I firmly agree with
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of utilizing it at learning. The advantages of using a different source to get knowledge are various which help
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to increase
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experience by research
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many websites.
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, in Covid-19
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many universities and schools seek to present a variety
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courses on management, design and languages.
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that can
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it
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effective
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to share documents between students and their teachers and practice interactive activities by
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a group in Google Drive to discuss homework and play on KAHOOT.
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, the disadvantages of using
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internet
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by students
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they cannot think in creativity side because they are stealing the ideas and stop
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out of the box.
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, it is not good for their health because most
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young
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people prefer to spend free time
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playing with friends online rather than outdoor meet.
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, recent United States research study results that 75% of students copy the essay from websites and they don't understand exactly task to answer on it by
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them self
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. In conclusion, I do not support the suggestion that
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use has to be restricted in education. As The student can use the
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a good way more than the other ways throughout increasing their information and knowledge.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • independent learning
  • critical thinking
  • excessive reliance
  • hinder
  • crucial
  • problem-solving
  • overly dependent
  • diversity
  • perspectives
  • global cultures
  • enriching
  • unrestricted
  • information overload
  • discerning
  • credible sources
  • incorporation
  • engagement
  • adaptivity
  • personalized learning
  • innovative
  • pedagogy
  • digital age
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