Some people believe that it is best to accept a situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The acceptance of a tough moment or situation always depends on how people can face the daily
situations
, even though these trends
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get worst. In my experience, accepting a bad situation helps you to start or maybe continue a process of improving yourself and your environment. Personally, I prefer to do it
this
way because of two factors, how I was taught since I was a child and what I had learnt with the pass of
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time. Since I am conscious of myself, I had grown in a “not giving up” family, so I had been taught not to give up despite the situation I am, or we are facing. By the way,
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time passed, and it
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me the wisdom to not be weak in sort of
situations
.
However
, many people still think that accept bad
situations
is just let others step on them and treat them like trash in a lot of
situations
,
also
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these people do not have a worthy life,
on the other hand
, the
situations
are not precisely better but at least is not as bad as many others. Summing up, having bad
situations
is something we must live with
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because nothing is perfect, but, facing them can let you gain not only mental and physical strength but as well some wise recommendations for the future, without passing details, always face everything if necessary.
Finally
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enough determination to face everything but is mostly done for something even bigger than themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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