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In many countries people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

#countries #people #waste #materials #bottles #newspapers
Recycling
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waste materials is one of the effective methods to control
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environmental pollution. Especially, recycling materials
such
 as plastic,
papers
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 and glass is an important practice to decrease our impact on the environment. Hordes of
people
 across the world do not recycle their waste as they are used to landfill.
This
 essay will discuss why
this
 might be the case and how
this
 problem can be alleviated. The reasons for the lack of recycling is quite simple.
Firstly
, in most
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countries
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 official recycling programmes
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 not exist, or they are relatively new.
Therefore
,
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numerous
people
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 not have awareness
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 the importance of
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 process. They are being used to engage with regular
landfill
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 without putting too much thought
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 it.
On the other hand
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 is not encouraging the citizens towards the collection of their waste and the process of its recycling. To encourage
people
 to recycle more, a comprehensive public campaign is required. A good start would be to explain to
people
 what economic and environmental benefits recycling can provide.
For instance
, Flyers can be delivered to each home and advertising on television. The
next
 step is, the government should encourage public and startup companies to recycle the garbage collections by giving benefits like tax exemptions and subsidies. To summarize, it is the lack of awareness about the benefits of recycling and sort of refuse that prevents them from engaging with their convenient practice without much thought. When they fully understand the advantages, It leads them to recycle their rubbish at home and outside. I believe that
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 many will choose to do the right thing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • apathy
  • environmental impact
  • passive attitude
  • recycling infrastructure
  • sustainability
  • accessible
  • disposing
  • awareness
  • participate
  • incentivizing
  • motivate
  • tangible
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