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In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice

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With the revolution in technology, the
mode
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 of
education
 in the future may become subjective where
students
 will have the choice to educate themselves via offline or online mode of learning. I would certainly opt for online
education
 and the logical reasons behind
this
 decision are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, the online method of schooling using technological devices offers ease of accessibility to daily lectures. It means, commuting to
school
 and experiencing discomfort
such
 as harsh weather and traffic congestions which are involved in traditional schooling are entirely eliminated in an online study that only requires a click of a few buttons and classes can be attended while being in a comfort zone.
As a result
, the academic output is certainly hampered as a body and mind become extremely exhausted by everyday commute whereas online class does not involve an everyday travelling full of hassles.
For instance
, a typical student ends up spending 45 minutes to commute to
school
 in which
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duration of dressing up and getting ready for
school
 is excluded. Online
education
on the other hand
, only involves precious lecture hours which does not exhaust
students
 and they are better able to concentrate on their curriculum.
Secondly
,
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virtual lectures develop a self-
studystudy
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study study
 capability whereas visiting
school
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 every day does not inculcate
such
 an essential habit.
This
 is because ,unlike traditional schooling, the
students
 do not have their companion to support in the online mode of study which certainly encourages
students
 to utilize their own mental ability to study
instead
 of relying on friends to assist them every time. To instantiate,
students
 at
school
 are highly
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 upon other
students
 before their examinations whereas those who attend lectures
in
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 a technological device remotely have developed their own methods which help them to perform better in academics. To conclude, with the advancement of technology the online
education
 system would certainly be preferred over
traditional
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 schooling method as it offers overall a better learning experience by avoiding the wastage of time and effort and developing crucial self-learning skills
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