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To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. Do you agree or disagree?

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work
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 of art, painting, sculpture and many other art forms should display specific types of qualities that are unique. But, over the previous decades, the quality of prize-winning
artwork
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 has been a decrease and now most of the simple
artwork
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 has been listed as masterpieces whereas real
artwork
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 passes unnoticed. In my opinion, I totally agree with
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 statement that real
artwork
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 doesn't get enough attention as compared to ordinary
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. In
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 essay, the reason will be explained with relevant examples. On one hand, the real evaluation of the
artwork
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 has been lost its importance. Nowadays, most of the students are encouraged by their teachers and parents to be a doctor, engineer, scientific scholar, good athletes and so on.
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, in Bangladesh, most of the pupils choose their career paths as a doctor or Government employee (BCS cadre), unfortunately, no one has been grown interested in
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 like in previous days.
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, the true evaluator has not emerged in recent decades.
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, the fake
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 gets the award prize,
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, true
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 achieves no
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.
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, true
artworks
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 have declined their value because of the fake
artworks
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 in the market. There are many phoney
artworks
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 that exist in the market which looks like real
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.
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, it is really difficult to separate the fake works from the true ones.
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, nowadays, it is easily possible to identify the copy
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 by using highly advanced technology. To conclude, both personnel
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 evaluation quality and broader uses of technology must need to ensure correctly evaluate the true
artworks
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.
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