There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter Describe the complaints that have been made Say why the reception area is important suggest how the reception area could be improved
Dear
Mr.
Jones,
I am writing Change the punctuation
Mr
this
letter in regards to the negative responses we have been getting in relation to our reception Linking Words
area
and how it is influencing the business.
Most of the complaints are about the size of the waiting Use synonyms
area
, where during pick times are crowded with Use synonyms
people
, both selling and customers. Use synonyms
People
are being discouraged to visit our company, due to Use synonyms
this
recurring situation.
The reception Linking Words
area
is not a place where a company usually gives too much attention, Use synonyms
however
, due to our business Linking Words
being mostly build
on Change the verb form
being mostly built
people
, I believe we should act on it and make it a more accommodating place for everyone.
I would suggest Use synonyms
to implement
visiting time hours Change the verb form
implementing
to
the Change preposition
for
people
who came to sell new products to us. For our clients, as they have Use synonyms
also
suggested in our surveys, give them Linking Words
also
the option to book a visit so the wait time would lower. And to those who come without a booking, let them Linking Words
aware
of the option as well as give it a clear view of how long it will take to be answered on that specific day.
Please let me know if you have any thoughts about it, and any other Add a missing verb
be aware
suggestion
on how to improve Fix the agreement mistake
suggestions
this
Linking Words
area
, which in my view, is essential for our growth in the industry.
Yours Sincerely,
Lury JavaUse synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite