A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of Income. Unfortunately, tourism can be cause of lot of problem if its not well managed . What are the advantage and dis advantage in the modern world? Do you think advantage overweight the disadvantage .

For many developing countries,
tourism
is considered
as
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high
revenue generating
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revenue-generating
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sectors
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sector
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. Several
countires
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countries
incomes are highly dependent on
tourist
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tourists
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. Along with the
advantages
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,advantages
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there are several
disadvantges
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disadvantages
for
tourism
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the tourism
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sector. In my opinion,
toursim
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tourism
should always be encouraged by
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society and
government
. Undoubtedly, it has several
disavdantage
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disadvantages
disadvantage
,one of
major
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disadvanage
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disadvantage
is the traffic jams.
Instead
of using public transport ,
tourist
always
prefer
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their
peronal
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personal
cabs, which certainly increase the number of cars on road.
This
situation not only causes
a traffic jams
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traffic jams
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but
also
leads to several accidents on
road
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the road
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as most of the
people
are in rush to reach
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their destination. Recently, Tiblisi is open for
trousit
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transit
trout
tourist
and as per the local
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the number of
accident
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the accident
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has surged since
last
year. In
additioan
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addition
to it , as per the United
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report
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air quality has degraded for most of the
tourist
places, one of the
crtitical
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critical
reason
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reasons
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is pollution
emmited
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emitted
by the cars.
Secondly
, waste
manegement
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management
is another challenge f , visitors
genrally
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generally
throw away their stuff as per their convenience, its becoming challenge for the local
athourity
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authority
to
keey
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keep
the city clean.
Nonetheless
, the
advatage
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advantage
of
tourism
indutry
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industry
are
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is
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greater.
Firstly
, being a four trillion dollar industry it provides jobs to
million
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millions
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of
people
acorss
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across
the world. Cities
such
as Baku, where
industires
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industries
can not be easily set up due to its
geograpic
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geographic
geographical
location.
Tourism
has provided
the
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jobs to 70 % of the population.
Untill
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Until
Baku was declared
as
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a
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tourist
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a tourist
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place, natives of
this
place were jobless and it was hard for them to survive.
Now
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these
people
are living happily and are less dependent on the
government
schems
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schemes
scheme
. The amount of revenue
genrated
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generated
by the
trousim
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tourism
is much higher than the
government
expenditure ,
hence
surplus
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amount is
utlized
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utilized
utilised
by the
goevrnement
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government
for the health
sectors
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sector
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. Considering
this
fact ,
lately
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Pakistan has started
promotiong
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promoting
their
trousit
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tourist
trust
spots with
lot
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a lot
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of economical
package
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packages
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. Pakistani
,
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has prepared
themsleves
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themselves
to tackle all the known problems created due to
tourism
. In conclusion,
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government
has to define the rules to mitigate the
problesm
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problem
problems
created by
tourism
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the tourism
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industry. Even the individual in
tourism
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the tourism
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filed
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field
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has to lead from the front and guide
visotrs
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visitors
visors
for their waste
manegment
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management
.
Otherwise
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,
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profit making
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profit-making
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industry will suffer loss and soon
people
will
be start
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looking for alternate places for their vacation.
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