A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of Income. Unfortunately, tourism can be cause of lot of problem if its not well managed . What are the advantage and dis advantage in the modern world? Do you think advantage overweight the disadvantage .

For many developing countries,

tourism

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is considered

as

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a

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high

revenue generating

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sectors

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sector

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. Several

countires

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countries

incomes are highly dependent on

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tourist

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tourists

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. Along with the

advantages

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,advantages

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there are several

disadvantges

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disadvantages

for

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tourism

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the tourism

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sector. In my opinion,

toursim

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tourism

should always be encouraged by

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society and

government

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. Undoubtedly, it has several

disavdantage

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disadvantages

disadvantage

,one of

major

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disadvanage

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disadvantage

is the traffic jams.

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of using public transport ,

tourist

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always

prefer

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their

peronal

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personal

cabs, which certainly increase the number of cars on road.

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situation not only causes

a traffic jams

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traffic jams

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but

also

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leads to several accidents on

road

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the road

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as most of the

people

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are in rush to reach

to

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their destination. Recently, Tiblisi is open for

trousit

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transit

trout

tourist

and as per the local

reports

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the number of

accident

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the accident

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has surged since

last

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year. In

additioan

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addition

to it , as per the United

Nation

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report

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air quality has degraded for most of the

tourist

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places, one of the

crtitical

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critical

reason

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reasons

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is pollution

emmited

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emitted

by the cars.

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, waste

manegement

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management

is another challenge f , visitors

genrally

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generally

throw away their stuff as per their convenience, its becoming challenge for the local

athourity

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authority

to

keey

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keep

the city clean.

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, the

advatage

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advantage

of

tourism

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indutry

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industry

are

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greater.

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, being a four trillion dollar industry it provides jobs to

million

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millions

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of

people

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acorss

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across

the world. Cities

such

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as Baku, where

industires

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industries

can not be easily set up due to its

geograpic

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geographic

geographical

location.

Tourism

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has provided

the

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jobs to 70 % of the population.

Untill

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Until

Baku was declared

as

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a

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tourist

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a tourist

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place, natives of

this

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place were jobless and it was hard for them to survive.

Now

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these

people

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are living happily and are less dependent on the

government

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schems

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schemes

scheme

. The amount of revenue

genrated

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generated

by the

trousim

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tourism

is much higher than the

government

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expenditure ,

hence

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surplus

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amount is

utlized

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utilized

utilised

by the

goevrnement

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government

for the health

sectors

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sector

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. Considering

this

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fact ,

lately

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Pakistan has started

promotiong

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promoting

their

trousit

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tourist

trust

spots with

lot

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a lot

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of economical

package

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packages

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. Pakistani

,

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has prepared

themsleves

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themselves

to tackle all the known problems created due to

tourism

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. In conclusion,

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the

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government

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has to define the rules to mitigate the

problesm

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problem

problems

created by

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tourism

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the tourism

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industry. Even the individual in

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tourism

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the tourism

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filed

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field

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has to lead from the front and guide

visotrs

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visitors

visors

for their waste

manegment

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management

.

Otherwise

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,

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profit making

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profit-making

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industry will suffer loss and soon

people

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will

be start

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looking for alternate places for their vacation.