Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology .In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?Has this become a positive or negative development?

Technology
has emerged by leaps and bounds .
Automation
provide
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the
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myriad
benfits
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benefits
for every person. owing to some community argue that machinery
are
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not feeling happy and other
individual
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say that the
technology
makes
pepole
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people
life conveniently .I will discuss the reason in aforementioned
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paragraphs
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is easier and helpful for every person life.when it comes to the computers helps the
time consuming
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.
For instance
,
the
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each person do shopping with help of
technology
become easily.
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,
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automation
provides
agood
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a good
source of earning money.As a,
result
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the
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every humankind life become easily after adopting
the
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technology
.
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,
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automation
is not beneficial for some
purpose
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it creates apply pollution and the health problem.
For example
,the children most use of the
technology
namely, mobile
phone
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and other gadgets. one of the
reason
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behind
this
is the youngster face
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many chronic
diseases
such
as eyesight and obesity problem.what is more the machinery is increased the unemployment raise and human being face financial problem. To sum up,there are numerous benefits of
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automation
.
Technology
made people slaves.In
modern
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era,
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people
more
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dependent
for
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the
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technology
. The individual
suffer
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the harmful disease.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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