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Nowadays pollution is increasing, there are many reasons for it. Use of plastic products and plastic bags has increased which cannot be recycled which creates pollution in the environment. What steps people and government should take to reduce it. Give reasons and examples for your answer.

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In recent years factoring raised every country produced their product to other nations.
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, factories give a lot of
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products
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 that do not recycle and harm
nature
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.Society needs to diminish it.
This
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 essay will consider the main cause of unrecycled items which harms
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, before proposing two possible solutions. Perhaps, the most important cause of
plastic
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 bags problems is the low cost to produce.Compare to recyclable
products
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such
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 as paper woven polypropylene, and woollen materials cost more.
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, companies rather choose harmful materials to make cheap
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.
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, the cause is customers choices.The majority of people knows
plastic
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 things will harm the environment but still buying it.That's the way
plastic
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 bags
usage
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 increasing and harming
nature
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.
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, there are two promising solutions to
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 problem.
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 of all nations governments need to charge fees, who producing
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products
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 and give tax credit who creates friendly to environment items.
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, society stops getting harmful items
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 purchase eco
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 and share their comments on social media
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 as Instagram, Facebook etc.After all of these
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products
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 will diminish year by year and eventually,
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 will disappear In conclusion, in past years humans
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usage
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 is increased
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 of animals
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 having a hard time.Especially sea animals
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 as turtles fiches seals,plastics stuck their necks and stays rest of their lives some of them eventually dies.
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 we need to stop our
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 and change others.If the community still don't do anything on earth all beings might be extinct.
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, people need to just always choose eco-
products
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 rather than harmful ones.,Eventually there is no
usage
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, companies will change.
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