Write a minimum of 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: Details about the conference Why do you want your colleague to give a presentation? What arrangement will you do for this conference?

Dear Mr Abhi, I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I am arranging a conference on “The sexual harassment at the workplace".
This
event will have notable speakers from various organizations who will deliver their own views on the topic & will
also
suggest their ways to handle the same. It will be great if you obliged us by representing our organization. Let me explain in more detail.
Initially
, for
this
event
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I reached out to Mr Ben, the head
HR
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of HR
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, and he recommended me your name.
Besides
that, he
also
mentioned that you are handling
this
sensitive issue seamlessly for the company.
Thus
, your participation in
this
conference will add more value to it.
Moreover
, as we are
also
the winner of a prestigious award in
this
category
last
year;
thus
, it makes more sense if you share your thoughts. I am sure all the participants will
also
love to hear it, and implement them at their own workplaces. I am taking care of the logistics and stationery part;
thus
, arranging for a projector, a microphone, a
white-board
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& few chart papers for
this
event. Could you please let me know if you have any additional
requirement
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? I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Shreya
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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