People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In these present times, healthcare costs are rising due to the growth in modern diseases and viruses which are effect

from

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harmful routines. These lifestyles include

disadvantage

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nutrition, smoking and lack of exercise.

However

, I partially agree with

this

statement.

Thus

, in

this

essay, both sides of

this

issue will be discussed.

People

who have unhealthy daily life like to ignore

about

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their fitness.

For example

, drink alcohol, smoking, consume fatty food and so on.

Moreover

, the major of deceases are occur from personal

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. As the result,

human

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have

an

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unusual

symptom

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and go to

hospital

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to cure.

Then

, persons who get sick should have to spend more than well – being

person

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because treatment expenditure include medicines, services from

medical

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center

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, lab test, and etc.

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, the office man who

love

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to do their work overtime,

not

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allocate time to work out, and

devour

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junk foods is affected

from

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cancer.

Hence

,

this

man must use his saving money to pay for treatment. While

,

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healthy

people

are not matter

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to disburse for curing.

In contrast

, all

people

should have

a

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welfare from the government to approach public health because it must be

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basis

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privilege of all. So, it will

be disagreed

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in

this

issue whatever you have a weak condition or strong body, you must deserve public health services thoroughly. It can illustrate which sickness

people

should be cured

from

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government healthcare

in

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suitable

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price and do not cash in the extra bills. In conclusion, from my perspective, I agree with

statement

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because everyone should care yourselves in order to spend additional for remedy and help to reduce emergency

patient

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patients

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.