It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Art and sport are two different fields which are as important as other fields and
one
can
also
achieve success if they have an interest as well as a good trainer who taught them to
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their goals,
However
,most of the people reckon that innate abilities are necessary to
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a successful individual in both sides but sometimes it is
also
claimed that
one
can
also
perform well with having professional training.I will discuss
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both views in the following paragraphs. On the
one
hand,god gifted skills are playing a vital role in our life as by site an example of a singer,most of the successful singers have god gifted singing
talent
which they inherited in their genes so it is
also
true that
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mostly
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skills are transferring from generation to generation or directly given by the superior power.
Additionally
,natural abilities are helpful to achieve
the
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success in a particular field,Along with
this
,it is a fact that every person has a specific
talent
likewise
sports and artistic skills are
also
be granted.
On the other hand
,guidance either from a trainer or from the parents
also
be needed to
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a specific destination,to exemplify
this
,parents are the
first
teacher of children and they can polish their
talent
if they want,
Besides
this
,it
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that there is nothing impossible in
this
world and
one
can be able to achieve
sucess
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success
if they have
spirit
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to
fulfille
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fulfil
their desires
such
as in sports and arts,training is must
to
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polish their
talent
and perform well in their fields,meanwhile,it is psychologically proven that practice makes a man perfect so if they
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,they will definitely be successful. In conclusion,
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according
to my opinion,both the statements are true to some extent,along with natural
talent
,training and guidance are
also
must to make a child artist or a
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • natural talent
  • innate ability
  • genetic predisposition
  • nurture
  • nurturing
  • develop
  • cultivate
  • foster
  • encourage
  • inherit
  • unravel
  • reveal
  • demonstrate
  • evidence
  • proof
  • counterargument
  • counter
  • overcome
  • compensate
  • arguably
  • debate
  • controversial
  • persuasive
  • convincing
  • conclusive
  • critical
  • essential
  • crucial
  • vital
  • significant
  • prominent
  • noteworthy
  • imperative
  • compulsory
  • fundamental
  • compelling
  • persuasive
  • support
  • favor
  • oppose
  • disagree
  • acknowledge
  • consider
  • claim
  • view
  • belief
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