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People believe that in order to reduce road accidents it should be mandatory for drivers to retake the driving test every three years. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

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By taking the driving test at regular intervals as every three years may help in the reduction of roadside accidents. I agree with the statement above and we attempt to look into some of the benefits and drawbacks of the practice. Driving a vehicle requires daily practice to expertise. For many young
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, operators it is difficult to handle emergency situations and long-distance driving. It takes you many years to drive long-
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 Recent studies show the increasing number of road accidents the onscreen driving have been one of the major causes. By practising more apply early crowd can glass from their skills effectively. Book monitoring community driving skills timely gives a look deeply into the ratio with the versus bad drivers. By imposing driving tests at regular intervals help people to grass and develop their habit of not overlook the traffic rules and behave responsibly. For an example of any citizen generally in a
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the country they have a very difficult time driving due to multiple regions assets that are bad at eyesight that bad health conditions and so on if we can find a solution or an alternative for them it would be a great help is a better choose an option like public transport or in person can help them. Indian I completely agree that we need a regular watch over drivers with the frequent monitoring system. Invite
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