Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development.

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In recent years, the phenomenon of teenagers get addicted to
computer
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games
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has aroused wide concern among various circles. Many
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nowadays tend to trade off their time on doing exercise for playing online
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and the situation would probably be aggravated in the future. The reasons behind
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behaviour could be attributed not only to personal
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social aspect.
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, it is undoubtedly
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phenomenon brings about negative development to the teenagers themselves and the society as well. Of the reasons why kids and adolescents are being attracted by online
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games
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, probably the most significant one is that they can enjoy
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while indulging in the virtual world. It is evident that
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are allowed to get their
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and adrenaline pumping even when they are sitting in front of the
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.
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, players are required to complete some tasks within a certain time limit, the excitement level
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case could be amplified by
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of urgency.
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, users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards which keep them playing continuously. It should
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be noticed that
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adults, teenagers generally have weaker self-control and mindset, which means they are easier to get distracted by those online
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with fancy storytelling and content.
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some people may argue playing
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games
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in some way may help
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to relax under great academic pressure, I would say that
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phenomenon without a doubt is a negative development.
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rather glue their
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to the
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screen than
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get involved in other social activities and participate in outdoor sports
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • allure
  • captivate
  • supervise
  • accessible
  • scarcity
  • safer alternative
  • peer pressure
  • educational tools
  • cognitive skills
  • implications
  • obesity
  • poor posture
  • hand-eye coordination
  • problem-solving abilities
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