The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.
The bar charts illustrate the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised
countries
during a decade Use synonyms
started
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starting
from
1980. Change preposition
in
It is clear that
the industrialised Linking Words
countries
were superior in all the aspects which the developing Use synonyms
countries
showed less.
In the initial year, the average Use synonyms
years
of schooling in the industrialised Use synonyms
countries
stood at 8.3 Use synonyms
years
, and it increased significantly until 10.2 Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
Hence
, the high level of the average Linking Words
years
of schooling, the number of scientists and technicians per 1000 people were 42 (1980) and 65 (1990). One thing that obviously caused it since the aforementioned Use synonyms
countries
were spending a large amount on Research and Development. Approximately $160 Use synonyms
billions
in 1980 and rose almost triple Correct your spelling
billion
in
the end of the decade ($350 Change preposition
at
billions
).
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billion
On the other hand
, the levels of participation in education and science in developing Linking Words
countries
showed the opposite. Since they Use synonyms
were
only invested less Unnecessary verb
apply
on
Research and Development in the initial year ($60 Change preposition
in
billions
) and decreased to Change to singular
billion
a
half in 1990 affected the average Correct article usage
apply
years
of schooling were Use synonyms
minority
. In 1980, only 2.3 Add an article
a minority
the minority
years
and there was a slight increase after a decade (3.8 Use synonyms
years
). SoUse synonyms
that
, per 1000 only found a small number of scientists and technicians. No more Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
20 specialists in both Correct word choice
than
field
throughout the Fix the agreement mistake
fields
years
.Use synonyms
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