The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.
The bar charts illustrate the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised
countries
during a decade started
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starting
from
1980. Change preposition
in
It is clear that
the industrialised countries
were superior in all the aspects which the developing countries
showed less.
In the initial year, the average years
of schooling in the industrialised countries
stood at 8.3 years
, and it increased significantly until 10.2 years
. Hence
, the high level of the average years
of schooling, the number of scientists and technicians per 1000 people were 42 (1980) and 65 (1990). One thing that obviously caused it since the aforementioned countries
were spending a large amount on Research and Development. Approximately $160 billions
in 1980 and rose almost triple Correct your spelling
billion
in
the end of the decade ($350 Change preposition
at
billions
).
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billion
On the other hand
, the levels of participation in education and science in developing countries
showed the opposite. Since they were
only invested less Unnecessary verb
apply
on
Research and Development in the initial year ($60 Change preposition
in
billions
) and decreased to Change to singular
billion
a
half in 1990 affected the average Correct article usage
apply
years
of schooling were minority
. In 1980, only 2.3 Add an article
a minority
the minority
years
and there was a slight increase after a decade (3.8 years
). So that
, per 1000 only found a small number of scientists and technicians. No more Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
20 specialists in both Correct word choice
than
field
throughout the Fix the agreement mistake
fields
years
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