Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

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It is frequently said that studying abroad could be beneficial for a

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there are some adverse

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the disadvantages.

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I think that a

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has to study wherever he wants, without difference between countries according to his

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, studying abroad can give

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the young

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more skills

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of attending the university close to home, for

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if a person study in

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country He will learn the native language and

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he will improve some essential skills as living alone without their parent.

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there are several advantages

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studying abroad, There are some drawbacks and negative

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problem and if you are far from your parents can be more stressful to find a solution without nobody can help you.

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there are a number of

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with our relatives that we never feel home-sick and In my experience can be extremely

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for examples video-chatting with my parents by Skype. In conclusion, I believe that a

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has to study abroad because it can be a great experience of life where He can learn and discover deeply new cultures but there will be are

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some drawbacks and

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could be a problem especially if the

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thanks to technology we can find a solution.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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