In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is

crime

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books and TV shows. It is undeniable that

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kind of literature and TV drama is becoming more popular, as result, it has become an essential

part

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of our life. For the purpose of

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tendency and give my opinion, both questions will be scrutinized. Everybody knows that different countries demonstrate various levels of

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many people want to get more information about offences. The one

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of society

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watching movies about

crime

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because they are a

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subculture. At the same time, another

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of people adore reading books about

crime

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since they want to understand criminals or, probably, they

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romantic reading

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novels. A good example here is policemen and

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, they should understand criminals if they

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liking to be successful professionals.

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teenagers watching

crime

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dramas copy main characters. Actors are role models for children. Movies “Peaky Blinders” and “Robin Hood” are the best explanation

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kind of art though popular.

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and success of the main characters

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in teenagers to be the same. Regarding me,

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I tend to think that criminal novels

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maybe

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useful for modern people the main reason is that nowadays individuals read less compared to

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century.

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kind of

books

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can habituate them to read more. Scientists tell us that reading

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our brain. But I guess that showing

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dramas is

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the wrong

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way.

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generation, how I told before, shadow actors,

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, want to do that in a real life. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned up into account in our final analysis we can say that the government of countries should control

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of movies if we want to grow law-abiding citizens.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Fully explain your ideas

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the coutryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

Nowadays, people believe that governments should invest tax-payer’s money in healthcare, others believe that money should be use in other areas. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

In some countries, many parents teach their kids that everything can be achieved if they work try enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year.