In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is

crime

books and TV shows. It is undeniable that

this

kind of literature and TV drama is becoming more popular, as result, it has become an essential

part

of our life. For the purpose of

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explain

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tendency and give my opinion, both questions will be scrutinized. Everybody knows that different countries demonstrate various levels of

crime

nevertheless

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many people want to get more information about offences. The one

part

of society

prefer

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watching movies about

crime

because they are a

part

this

subculture. At the same time, another

part

of people adore reading books about

crime

since they want to understand criminals or, probably, they

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romantic reading

that

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novels. A good example here is policemen and

securities

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, they should understand criminals if they

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liking to be successful professionals.

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teenagers watching

crime

dramas copy main characters. Actors are role models for children. Movies “Peaky Blinders” and “Robin Hood” are the best explanation

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kind of art though popular.

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and success of the main characters

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in teenagers to be the same. Regarding me,

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I tend to think that criminal novels

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maybe

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useful for modern people the main reason is that nowadays individuals read less compared to

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century.

This

kind of

books

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can habituate them to read more. Scientists tell us that reading

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our brain. But I guess that showing

crime

dramas is

wrong

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the wrong

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way.

Young

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generation, how I told before, shadow actors,

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, want to do that in a real life. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned up into account in our final analysis we can say that the government of countries should control

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of movies if we want to grow law-abiding citizens.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Fully explain your ideas

Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in highschools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspaper will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

SOME SAY THAT IN ALL LEVELS OF EDUCATION TOO MUCH TIME IS SPENT LEARNING FACTS AND NOT ENOUGH ON LEARNING PRACTICAL SKILLS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?