Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In the 21st century, the technology like
internet
extensively using
by Change the form of the verb
used
people
. In which one group of people
ponder that the facility of internet
should be free in manner, while another group opines that everyone should Add an article
the internet
change
an extra fee for the Correct your spelling
charge
service
. In this
essay, I will explain both views and will summarise my opinion regarding this
statement.
Firstly
, free
facility is more applicable for developing and underdeveloped countries because the Add an article
the free
people
over there cannot afford this
service
which make
a sense of disparities among them. Change the verb form
makes
Secondly
, it is more accurate for modern education that every students
learning Change to a singular noun
student
through
online which make a Change preposition
apply
government
initiative for free access. For example
, due to Correct article usage
the corona
corona virus
schools and public libraries are shut down, whereas the children learn their lessons through Google meet. Correct your spelling
coronavirus
In addition
, many developing countries government
provided free mobile Fix the agreement mistake
governments
internet
facilities for their children to continue their studies.
Thirdly
, we can construct online shopping, marketing, business strategies for meeting living expenses so government
introducing free network facilities not only enhance education but Correct article usage
the government
also
helps to meet the dreams of many people
in our society.
Apparently, giving a free service
is not an easy task it needs more infrastructure and money. Consequently
, poor countries need to meet mobile service
, mobile application, officials and policies for imparting these service
. Fix the agreement mistake
services
In addition
, it arises a question for paying services and it mobilize
a helping hand for the authorities to reduce their debt. Admittedly, the Change the verb form
mobilizes
people
now spending more time in
Change the preposition
on
internet
for leisure activities or other unnecessary things which brings Add an article
the internet
government
regulation of service
through paying extra money. To illustrate this
,Correct article usage
the
Government
of India now charging extra fund
for video game companies because youngsters Fix the agreement mistake
funds
now
addicted Add a missing verb
are now
these
games and spending more time Change preposition
to these
in
Change the preposition
on
internet
in order to regulate Correct article usage
the internet
this
, correctional methods applied
by controlling authorities.
In conclusion, we want technology to meet the needs of modern life but charging for Add a missing verb
are applied
this
service
should be on the basis of financial
background of Add an article
the financial
people
. otherwise
, it makes a huge difference between the life of rich and poor people
. it is high time that,
Remove the comma
apply
government insured
Add a hyphen
government-insured
internet
service
for all its citizen
, as they are the future of the nation.Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
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