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As reading is important for a good education, we should encourage our children to read what appeals to them.

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People are reading and learning through their entire life, but for me, the important point is the book they read. The
books
children
 read inspire them to the front to the fields of their interests and expand their imagination. Not only do the
books
 develop
children
’s imagination skills but
also
 make them gain knowledge about what we are interested in. In my opinion,
children
 should be encouraged to read what appeals to them. In childhood,
children
 gain knowledge significantly by reading
books
.
Therefore
 it's our job to direct them to read what they enjoy. Beginning from childhood,
children
 should be read a various number of
books
. In the meantime, they will have enough sources and a chance to find what they love. Even the bed stıries which told by parents may work on developing their imaginations. In schools, the curriculum follows a steady direction which leads to
children
's failure. The reason they fail is the
books
 they’re forced to read. They can't find a piece from themselves in the
books
 and get bored. The curriculum should supply them with a variety of
books
 and provide them
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chance to pick what appeals to them.
For example
, in primary school, we as a class were provided
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 opportunity and I read tens of writer's popular novels and had information about them.
Consequently
, I found out that I
htend
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tend
 to read detective
books
 and find it the most intriguing genre. In summary, it will be way easier for
children
 to find themselves providing that we encourage them to pick and read the
books
 they are a fan of. The most compelling reason for believing
this
 is that I found my field of interest and planning to study in
this
 way.
This
 chance should be given to others who want to find and achieve their future goals.
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