In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is positive or negative development?
Today, almost all companies have advertised their
products
as an “it is entirely changed and developed”. This
phenomenon is created by two main causes and I think it may be a positive development
. This
essay will demonstrate why this
phenomenon is existed and argue some positive developments.
Perhaps, the major reason for this
advertisement is that the world has been globalized rapidly and every countries’ businesses compete for each other freely, and customers have a lot of products
they choose. This
means that companies try to differentiate their products
from another same kind of products
and attract customers by new features of the products
. Moreover
, the customers and clients always seek and interest in new ones because of our psychological specificities. We are attracted, especially women, by strange new things, and also
we are bored with the same things for using long period. The Times recently reported that the average ageing of the commodity goods would be 18 months and costumers tend to want other different ones. So the corporations try to emphasize their products
’ changes.
It seems to me that this
development
contributes to good habitat for people and people tend to change and develop something at
some extent. Our continuous habit of looking for something new leads to more and more Change preposition
to
development
in all sectors. In other words
, our innovative nature is a unique factor for this
modern developed world. For example
, famous vehicle brands such
as Ford, Toyota, and Tesla are developing continuously and this
tremendously affects our life positively.
In summary, many businesses try to introduce a new side of their goods because of force competitive and human nature behavior
. Change the spelling
behaviour
This
development
might bring smash-hit in human
world.Add an article
the human
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite