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  increasingly diverse, a debate emerges as to whether 
  should be incorporated into school curriculums. While some people support 
 development, others consider it a waste of time that could be spent on other subjects. In 
 essay, I will discuss both sides and argue that as nourishment is an essential aspect of life, young children will benefit immensely from studying 
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 nutrition.
The fulcrum of the argument that 
  should be left out of syllabuses is the assumption that it is not necessary for young people. 
, most 
 do not prepare their own 
: they either eat meals cooked by their families or purchase them from restaurants and cafeterias. In respect to restaurants, there are 
 numerous options for those who prefer to eat healthy, which include and are not limited to vegan menus offered by 
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  companies like Burger King, or acai bowls and smoothies from dessert eateries. The 
 reason why learning about 
 appears to be trivial is the fact that chronic diseases resulting from unhealthy eating habits often manifest in middle age, since harmful substances need to 
 before being capable to cause ailments. Because of 
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  obesity, high blood pressure and other diet-related conditions in older age groups. 
, with the impression that children and young adults are unaffected by their diets, educators usually neglect the 
 of 
 and its preparation when the curriculum is concerned.
, it is crucial to study 
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 nutrition if 
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  is to be used optimally. It has been shown that 
 needs to be consumed in certain ways to function at its best in the human 
. 
, many spiritual gurus as well as movements encouraging healthier diets, 
 as the Satvic movement from India, suggests that we increase the 
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  of fruits we eat and avoid consuming canned or bottled 
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  since the former is easily digested but the latter is not. 
, some ingredients have powerful medicinal effects, which makes both excessive and inadequate absorption harmful for the 
. A good example would be honey. According to Sadhguru, a proficient teacher of spirituality and lifestyle, if honey is mixed with warm water, it energizes the 
 and enhances the mind’s capability due to its similarity to the human blood. 
, if drunk with cold water, it is nothing more than extra calories on the system. 
, being given the intricacy of the interaction between nourishment and the human 
, it is essential for 
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  at a young age to maintain physical and mental health.
In conclusion, 
 some people might prefer 
 to focus on “important” subjects 
 of learning about the function and preparation of 
, it has been proven that 
 exploration is mandatory for a healthy, balanced life. 
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  of the opinion that 
 should be educated about the what and the how when it comes to 
 as early on in the curriculum as possible.