Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

As a
matter
of
fact
, in
this
day and
age
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one of the most basic issues connects pollution
such
as rivers, lakes, seas and
others
and
this
problem disturbs more
people
.
To begin
with, why are lakes, rivers, seas polluted and reasons(?). I am of the opinion that there are various reasons on
this
matter
.
Firstly
, in
fact
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people
don't have enough data about
this
problem, they can't know results, dangers and
others
, on top of that more
people
consider that polluted areas will be cleaned. As an example, in
fact
, the spending time realizes in rivers, lakes and
others
in summer and polluting processes are realized with different ways,
for instance
throwing cigarettes, rubbishes of food and
others
. Briefly, there are many causes on
this
matter
and these are one of them Let us take a look at the consequences for animal life and human society. As far as I know, oxygen is decreased by
people
actions,
this
process is hazard both animal life and humans.
People
's resting areas are being collapsed. What is more,
people
's healthies have got indispensable signals dramatically, maybe their body can meet with various diseases. As a
matter
of
fact
, drinkable water can be created by
this
process no doubt,
also
this
situation is a crucial and indispensable problem for animals.
Furthermore
, animals' deaths can be created by
this
condition.
Hence
,
this
death and illness shows can be increased by
this
issue and probably, it is necessary to prevent. Taking everything into consideration,
this
process is decisive and essential for mankind.
Finally
, I believe strongly, protective measures should be enforced
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