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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign language. Others say that these are not the only reasons why. Someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is undeniable that the world at the present has increased communication for education, economics, and business. Some people say that the only cause for learning a foreign
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 is in order that travel or work
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overseas. Others say that travelling and working are not the only causes to learn a foreign
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. From my point of view,
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 learning a foreign
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 is offer more benefits to travel and work, there present other reasons. In the following paragraph, both views of
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 topic will be outlined in the detail. It is true to say that one of
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 important of learning an overseas
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 is that there can offer advantages to travel and career in their future.
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, everybody is often studying
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English
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the English
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language
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English
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the English
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language
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 is
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language
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 of the world. If you can talk
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 speech, you will be able to go everywhere in the world.
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, studying
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 speech can increase the chances of getting a good job and a lot of income.
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, many people say that they are studying an overseas speech
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 to they want to improve
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 skills to use in their future
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 as making new foreign friends
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create a connection.
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, many persons think that studying an overseas
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 can help them to gain a lot of knowledge in
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 society. When students want to study
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the History of King in the UK if they are searching just only
Thai
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 bools or Thai websites, the information will be ambiguous, compared with
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 books or
English
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 websites. In conclusion, I strongly believe that studying
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nonnative languages is beneficial to everyone, not only for travelling and working but
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others
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such
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 as creating a connection.
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, it is recommended that everybody should learn some overseas languages for their
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.
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