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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Even though the habit of online reading has been increasing, the most important source of information will be continuing to be the
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 for the biggest part of society. From my perspective, I totally disagree with
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 dislike printed
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 is because they are more engaged
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 ecological causes. To explain, they are more worried about products that may bring
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certain damage to the environment and printing
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 is a good example of unwanted behaviour.
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, they do not buy printed news as a way to produce less paper and less garbage, since it is thrown away after reading it. Another important consideration that contributes to my disagreement is because
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 are not even reading anymore. With the advent of the Internet,
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 became too attached to their phones that addiction contributed to change some habits and nowadays, they prefer watching some news
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 reading it. If they cannot watch the news, they read push notifications from a newspaper’s app once they received it and
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 the reading of the day. Unfortunately,
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elderly
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,
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 are undoubtedly the most important source of information. These
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contemporary gadgets and
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, they keep old habits. Obviously, they are not the majority of
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, even though they are living more.
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, they significantly represent an interesting parcel of the population and certainly,
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’ editors need to consider these
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 as a way to keep them alive
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 our society. In conclusion, I strongly disagree that printed papers will keep being the most resourceful manner of acquiring information.
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 are more engaged to eco causes which disapprove
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 materials and
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, they are not reading anymore. It is all too superficial, like push notifications.
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, the old
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 are still present and they probably will keep
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