You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

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Dear Sir , I recently attended the Blue heavens rock concert in Gurgaon where you were performing. I had always heard so much about you from people around that wanted to see you perform live. I must admit , loved every bit of your staging. Though it was my

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I have been listening to all your covers on repeat and watching all your previous acts. I totally adore how you mix Indian music forms with

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rock music ,

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the best

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I have ever heard. I myself am a singer with a small band in Chandigarh called Garaj and often play

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on my guitar. We perform at a club every

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and during

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jam at the clubhouse.Your work really inspires me and want to learn so much from you. Would like to meet you personally

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but I am sure with your packed schedule of tours around the world it's a far fetched dream.

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if we could connect over a video call and you could guide me over some

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techniques and how I could refine my act . Hoping to get some insights from you on

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music and hearing back soon . Regards , Chetna Kaul

Submitted by cchetnakaul on Sun Aug 08 2021

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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7 paragraphs

225 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Varied vocabulary

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