Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals .some people think that this cannot be changed while other believe actions can be taken to bring about a change .discuss both views and give your opinion.

A commonly held belief is that the planet has been influenced adversely by
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actions. While some people maintain that
this
harmful impact is irreversible, others claim that some transformations can be done to repair the environment.
This
essay will discuss both these points of
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and argue in the favor of the latter. On the one hand, the destruction of lands, animal’s habitation and mineral reserves
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irretrievable since it is a natural process
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lasts several centuries to be fixed. To illustrate,
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humanity has used 50% of the world’s fresh water and it is predicted that in 40 years, the world will have consumed 80% of the
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available which will be an ultimate shortage without any alternatives. As well as
this
once a species is lost, it
also
cannot be brought back.
Moreover
, all the plants and animal species on the planet are dependent on each other and if a creature declines, it can affect other animals and the whole ecosystem.
In other
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result
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ecological
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imbalance which is not changeable by humans.
On the other hand
, there are some actions
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can be done by both individuals and governments to deal with
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hardships.
For instance
, if governments impose harsher fines on poaching and illegal hunting, many endangered animals can be preserved.
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,
although
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barren lands, there might be some methods to enrich the fields and taking steps toward reforestation.
Likewise
, individual people should make the right choices to recycle, reduce energy consumption and purchase only environmentally friendly products. To sum up, from what has been discussed above,
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resource depletion and species extinction is irreversible and disrupt the balance of the ecosystem.
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many practices can be examined to prevent
further
changes in the environment.
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