Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

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Education is a basic
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of every citizen and it should be provided to each and every student. some people believe that everyone should have easy and free access to all
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of institutions.
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completely agree with the aforementioned notion. Most of the countries in the world , which are facing poverty, have people who could not have
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lifestyle so, it would be very difficult for them to
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cost of different courses .
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, in Nigeria, most of the
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are illiterate because of
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crisis,
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, the expense of different courses is rocket within 2 or 3 years.
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are not at the reach of
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family
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so,
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think that
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government
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should enforce some laws which make sure that every university should have reserve seats for
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weak
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, very bright from my college could not complete his higher due to shortage of money, who could be a
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financially
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can study
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grade they want to, despite
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being
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in the study, whereas,some of the
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for poor
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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