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Rich countries are getting richer while poor countries are getting poorer. what is the cause of this? what could be done to solve this problem?

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contemporary society, it is believed that rich
countries
 are increasing
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 number of wealth,
by contrast
, poor
countries
 are more and more being poorer. During the course of
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 a careful and objective manner before drawing my rational conclusion. It is obviously to argue that there is a plethora of
reason
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 to support
for
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the reasons why rich
countries
 are getting richer.
First
 and foremost, the wealthy
countries
 have great opportunities to approach
on
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the development of advanced
technology
 which
play
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 a vital role to boost the growth of the
countries
 comprising of science and economy.
Moreover
, they have a good education system which educated a large number of
skillfull
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 workforces in various of fields
such
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doctor, teacher,
scientist
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 who will contribute to
develop
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 the entire country. Eventually, it is undeniable to say that rich
countries
 have enough budgets in order to thrive the country, take care of citizens and pay for education which will make the
countries
 increase of wealth.
On the other hand
, the poor
countries
 who lack
of
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technology
, education and budgets
that
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lead them to the poorer. Within the development of cutting-the edge
technology
, poor
countries
 are not able to supply
this
 growth into their
countries
 because they do not afford to purchase
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the
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advanced
technology
 which plays
an
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 crucial role in agriculture or industrial zone.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
, without approaching high
technology
, citizens in these
countries
 do not have opportunities to be educated in a good educational system.
Consequently
, there are a large number of people who lack
of
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study and
skillfull
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skilful
skillfully
 workforces. In conclusion, the developed
countries
 could put their hands on
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supporting less powerful
countries
 in different ways in order to build a better world.
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